THE HOUSE

Theres was this boy named josh, and he had dreans but he didnt know what they where telling him. But lil did he know he would find out. One night he was home alone, it was dark and really stormy that night. Next think u know he heres someone whisper his name "josh...." at first josh thought je was just hearing things. But NO, he was wrong, there was someone or something in his house. Josh gets up, to go make something to eat. Someone knocked at the door. Josh walked slowely to the door to answer it. Creck goes the door. Josh opens it slowly, noone was there. He thought it was his friend playing a prank on him. Josh looked out the window, he saw a man with a huge knife, in his hand looking right at him, BOOM!! goes the thuder.. Josh jumps up fast. He ran up stares and locked his bedroom door. He heard the door SLAM open. Nest think u know he heard foot steeps coming up the stares....... Josh got so scared, Then Josh the man whispers... come here....... Josh hids under his covers......CRECK the door opens, Josh the man whispers again. it gave Josh chills up his spine. Found u the man says he takes the knife, and slits joshes thoght............Till this day noone knows where the man with the knife is......... they say he still walkes the streets till this day.....

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Comments (9)

	daveysgirlforever: 10/27/2006 7:38 PM omg!!!!! scary!!!!!!
	undertherose666: 10/27/2006 7:39 PM i think it was pretty good its a great idea and if u made it longer and mroe detailed it would be great
	123456b: 10/27/2006 7:40 PM thankies 4 that info ill do that when i write another one
	bubbles02: 10/28/2006 6:21 AM wow that's cool i couldn't do that b/c i don't want think !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!![:
	musiclover4040: 10/28/2006 7:39 AM SCARRYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY YYYYYY
	musiclover4040: 10/28/2006 7:40 AM i don't want any dude with a knife coming in my hoouse...lol
	vvlover25: 10/28/2006 10:15 PM Oh that was good I like it
	ashleysymone: 10/29/2006 1:58 AM awesome! that was a good one
	idora: 12/04/2006 6:29 PM I really do like some of works, you could work on the SCARRY story some more...I don't feel scared! The only person I fear is the big guy in the sky!!